In this concentration I did 4 citra-solv transfers to create a new structure with the tree branches. I worked back into the concentration with watercolor pencils to make the colors more bold.
I agree with Kelly on this one. I might add some ink so that it really draws your eye to the amazing shapes that you've created in the middle, they make your pieces really strong. I really like what you've done repetition-wise, I never would've thought to do anything like that in my work. I can't wait to see your next piece! :)
i agree with mo and kelly about the re-drawing. how you've citra-solved the peictures has created such interesting designs..almost a spider web effect but if you re-draw it would make it even cooler. i really love this one! def my favorite piece so far!!
I agree with the comments to add ink or even sharpie or darker colored pencil. I think pushing the contrast will take this piece from good to great! This is a clear repetitive structure and a very nice piece. I feel like with this image and the last image, you are getting a feel for how to represent rain. I'm not sure I see the emotional connection. However, it is a valid concentration to simply show rain in 12 different ways. I think if you push the design structures we learned, it will be a very strong concentration when done.
In this concentration I did 4 citra-solv transfers to create a new structure with the tree branches. I worked back into the concentration with watercolor pencils to make the colors more bold.
The only thing I would do... is maybe add some ink or some kind of paint and draw back in. Just to enhance the design maybe. Looks good though!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kelly on this one. I might add some ink so that it really draws your eye to the amazing shapes that you've created in the middle, they make your pieces really strong. I really like what you've done repetition-wise, I never would've thought to do anything like that in my work. I can't wait to see your next piece! :)
ReplyDeletei agree with mo and kelly about the re-drawing. how you've citra-solved the peictures has created such interesting designs..almost a spider web effect but if you re-draw it would make it even cooler. i really love this one! def my favorite piece so far!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comments to add ink or even sharpie or darker colored pencil. I think pushing the contrast will take this piece from good to great! This is a clear repetitive structure and a very nice piece. I feel like with this image and the last image, you are getting a feel for how to represent rain. I'm not sure I see the emotional connection. However, it is a valid concentration to simply show rain in 12 different ways. I think if you push the design structures we learned, it will be a very strong concentration when done.
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